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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Wow, I don't think I can complete with the previous critique, but I'll try anyway. I found it in one if the groups I'm in.
I rrakl like the color scheme you chose for it, it gives it a peaceful dreamlike atmosphere which I'm assuming was your intention given the general nature of the piece.
I also like the movement and ovular flow you made by putting the main focus on the off center character. Having her head on and in the center would have, in only my opinion probably, taken away from the full appreciation of the piece and out it slightly off balance. The flow also keeps the eye busy and moving which is important.
Also, its a nice touch having her outfit graduate into the background.
The use of the yellow is also nice because, since there is that nighttime and dreamlike atmosphere, the yellow shines through almost like a noon would which just adds to its beauty.
Your drawing style used also reminds me of either flowing water or blowing petals which just jeeps adding to it and makes it seem even more surreal. And her content expression fits well too.
Overall, its suuper pretty and really well done. I hope someone walks along and gives you a pay on the back because you deserve it. Thank you for sharing the pretty piece so I could see it.
Have a pleasant day/night~